Traveling is really important for us in the working day. People today always give themselves lots of pressure and burden in the life, and travel is a good way to make people far away from bad mood.
However, some of them like to travel by themselves because of the freedom called backpacking. Maybe the expenses budget is more expensive than the tour travel trip but the schedule you can plan by yourself, it has a lot of choices that you can decide.
You can also learn how to be independent of others.
Otherwise, if you hate to be alone, tour travel is also a good choice for you. There have a lot of advantages of it as follows:
One, you can make lots of friends in your trip, and your trip can be more colorful.
Second is that there will have one tour guide to introduce the spectacular landscape or the historical remains there.
The biggest advantage is that you can save lots of money than backpacking because you can get more favor.
But whatever you choose, I think the most important thing is that your mind can relax and have fun in your trip.
It is good to find you try to compare the differeces between backpacking and tour travel trip in your article. The article structure is clear, too. However, I would say this would have been a better work if you could have used some of the writing skills that I taught you in the online lecture. :)
回覆刪除Here are some minor mistakes I would like you to examine again:
Firstly, the following sentence in paragraph 2 is grammatically correct, but the 'however' doesn't precisely link it to paragraph 1: "However, some of them like to travel by themselves because of the freedom called backpacking. "
In addition, 'because of the freedom called backpacking' is grammatically accurate, but it doesn't sound right.
Finally, please re-examine the clause: "There have a lot of advantages" (line 2, paragraph 3)